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Tuesday, May 17, 2011
II Week 14; It started as a fairy tale
What differences and similarities are there between Princess Diana's story and a fairytale ?
Work in groups of 3 to write down 10 sentences until Wednesday , 18th May , 6 pm.
-Differences 1. Fairy tales always have happy endings 2. Fairy tales heve imaginary characters 3. The main characters do not die in fairytale 4. Currently only living happily ever after
-Similarities 1. It's princes and kings, as in most fairy tales 2. In the story of Princess are horse drawn carriages as in fairy tales 3. In story appear magic numbers 3 and 7 4. Appear dramatic moments 5. They lead a happy life until an appears obstacle 6. The two royal princes from royal families
Differences: 1. - Princess Diana's Story started as a nice and lovely story and it ended as a tragically dramatic one. - The fairytale starts nicely with a special introduction and has a romantic end with "And they lived happily ever after." 2. - Diana's story has a evil-triumph end. - The fairytale has a good-triumph end. 3. - In the Princess's story there is no magical specific number like 3 or 7.
Similarities: 1. - The action of Diana's marriage took place in a palace (Buckingham). 2. - The magic appears in the ceremony 3. - She has been loved by everyone since then. (as a main character). 4. - It appears a "fight" between good and evil. (Diana - Charles). 5. - There are some royal characters as princesses,princes, The Queen etc. 6. - The Main Characters are important or even royal and ,many times, human. 7. - A countrygirl marries a prince. (like the SnowWhite ,The Beauty and The Beast).
A difference between Princess Diana’s story and a fairytale is that the fairytale begin with ,, Once upon a time,, and Diana’s story began with the year 1981.In Diana’s story evil overcame good and she died. In a fairytale all people were happy, but in this story happy is only Charles and they led separate lives. In a fairytale the couple is always happy and they loved, but Diana and Prince Charles divorced.
A similarities between the story and a fairytale is the fairy tale ceremony in the palace. Another similarities is all the kings and queens who were there. Diana was gracious, lovely, smiley , she was England’s rose. All the princess in all fairytales are unforgettable as Diana. Another similarities is love! All people loved Diana.
1)The story it begin with"once upon a time"but the story not begin with"once upon a time". 2)In fairytale are magic number like 3 and 7 but in story isn't magic number. 3)In fairytale is characters evil and in story isn't characters evil. 4)In story isn't dragons but in fairytale is dragons. 5)In fairytale the characters is very happy and in story the characters have problems. 6)In fairytale is battle but in story isn't battle. 7)In story the characters died but in fairytale the characters have a long,long life. 8)In fairytale the caracters have magic strenght bunt in story the characters not have magic strenght. 9)In story exist television and in fairytale not exist. 10)The fairytale it finishes with"....and they lived happily ever after"but the story not finishes with".....and they lived happily ever after.
Differences and similarities between a fairytale and a story: 1) A fairytale begins with " Once upon a time",but a story no. 2) In a fairytale the action had place in a palace or in a castle like in Princess Diana's story where the action had place in a palace. 3)In a fairytale there are imaginary characters ,but in a story there are real characters. 4)In a fairytale there are magic numebrs like three and seven,but in a story there aren't. 5)In a fairytale there are kings,queens,princes and princesses like in Princess Diana's story where there are a queen,a prince and a princess. 6)In a fairytale the good had the first place ,but in a story the evil win. 7)In a fairytale the characters had supernatural powers but in a story no. 8)A fairytale is totally magic ,but a story is real. 9)In a fairytale all the characters are happy,but in a story there aren't. 10)The fairytale finishes with "...and they lived happily ever after",but the story finishes sad.
The differences were :fairytale always ends with a happy-end;fairytale has magic characters. The similarities were: Diana was a princess;the magic appears at the ceremony. Maroiu A.
Adriana T. ; Anca M. ; Clara M. The comment is almost perfect! TEACHER'S NEED : at the start ,there is "between a fairytale .... which describes a real action that has happened, ... " There appears a present perfect . It's correct? There is no result,and the final of speak is very far. If it's wrong : -10sp (secondarypoint = sutimi)
MARK : 10 - 9.90 (GOOD-JOB)
Theodor M.
The comment is good,but not for 10.
Mistakes:Diferences 2 : > heve< it's "have" Similarities 3 : there are not 3 or 7 in the story. (Diana's)
Mark: 8.90
Cristina S. Great comment,but very close to 9.
Mistakes: 1> there is "a story no" it's the story doesn't" 4> numebrs -> numbers 7> the same mistake as 1. TEACHER'S NEED : at 2 : there is had place is correct? I know as took place If it's wrong -20SP
MARK: 9.75 - 9.55
Maroiu A.
The comment is correct but how about the rest of the phrases?
Mihai R. His comment it's perfect. Mark:10 Ioana S. Her comment it's perfect. Mark:10 Corina P. Mistakes: -"The story it begin with"( without "it" and "begin" with "s")[-0.20] -"the story not begin with"(the correc form it's "didn't begin")[-0.20] -"In fairytale are magic number like 3 and 7 but in story isn't magic number."(number it's with "s" and correct is "aren't")[-0.30] -"In fairytale is characters evil and in story isn't characters evil."( Correct is:In a fairytale are evil characters and in the story aren't evil characters.)[-1.00] -"In story isn't dragons but in fairytale is dragons."(Correct is :In the story there aren't dragons but in a fairytale are dragons)[0.50] -"In fairytale the characters is very happy and in story the characters have problems. (Correct is :In a fairytale the characters are very happy and in the story the characters have problems.)[-0.15] -"In fairytale is battle but in story isn't battle.(Correct is: In a fairytale ...in the story.)[0.05] -"In story the characters died but in fairytale the characters have a long,long life.(Correct is:In the story ...in a fairytale.)[0.05] -"In fairytale the caracters have magic strenght bunt in story the characters not have magic strenght.(Correct is:In a fairytale...but in the story the characters don't have...)[0.10] Mark:7.45
-Differences
ReplyDelete1. Fairy tales always have happy endings
2. Fairy tales heve imaginary characters
3. The main characters do not die in fairytale
4. Currently only living happily ever after
-Similarities
1. It's princes and kings, as in most fairy tales
2. In the story of Princess are horse drawn carriages as in fairy tales
3. In story appear magic numbers 3 and 7
4. Appear dramatic moments
5. They lead a happy life until an appears obstacle
6. The two royal princes from royal families
Theodor M.
VII-F
Differences:
ReplyDelete1. - Princess Diana's Story started as a nice and lovely story and it ended as a tragically dramatic one.
- The fairytale starts nicely with a special introduction and has a romantic end with "And they lived happily ever after."
2. - Diana's story has a evil-triumph end.
- The fairytale has a good-triumph end.
3. - In the Princess's story there is no magical specific number like 3 or 7.
Similarities:
1. - The action of Diana's marriage took place in a palace (Buckingham).
2. - The magic appears in the ceremony
3. - She has been loved by everyone since then. (as a main character).
4. - It appears a "fight" between good and evil. (Diana - Charles).
5. - There are some royal characters as princesses,princes, The Queen etc.
6. - The Main Characters are important or even royal and ,many times, human.
7. - A countrygirl marries a prince. (like the SnowWhite ,The Beauty and The Beast).
Between a fairytale and a story which describes a real action that has happened, there are similarities, but differences, too.
ReplyDelete1.The fairytale begins with "Once upon a time...", but the real story doesn't begin in this manner.
2.In a fairytale there are kings, queens, princes and princesses similar to the story where there are a queen, a prince and a princess.
3.The fairytale has characters with supernatural powers but in the story they don't have any unusual powers.
4.In a fairytale there are magic numbers like three and seven, while in Princess Diana's story there are not symbolical numbers.
5.In a fairytale the good outsmarts the evil but in the story the evil outsmarts the good.
6.The real action takes place in a palace, The Buckingham Palace. In the same time, in a fairytale the action takes place in a palace or in a castle.
7 In Princess Diana's story there are real characters, while in a fairytale there are imaginary characters.
8.The fairytale is full of fiction, while Princess Diana's life was real.
9.In the story of Princess's life there is a little of magic exactly like in a fairytale.
10.The fairytale finishes with “... and they lived happily ever after “ while Princess Diana’s story ends tragically.
Adriana T., Ancuta M., Clara M.
A difference between Princess Diana’s story and a fairytale is that the fairytale begin with ,, Once upon a time,, and Diana’s story began with the year 1981.In Diana’s story evil overcame good and she died. In a fairytale all people were happy, but in this story happy is only Charles and they led separate lives. In a fairytale the couple is always happy and they loved, but Diana and Prince Charles divorced.
ReplyDeleteA similarities between the story and a fairytale is the fairy tale ceremony in the palace. Another similarities is all the kings and queens who were there. Diana was gracious, lovely, smiley , she was England’s rose. All the princess in all fairytales are unforgettable as Diana. Another similarities is love! All people loved Diana.
Ioana S.
1)The story it begin with"once upon a time"but the story not begin with"once upon a time".
ReplyDelete2)In fairytale are magic number like 3 and 7 but in story isn't magic number.
3)In fairytale is characters evil and in story isn't characters evil.
4)In story isn't dragons but in fairytale is dragons.
5)In fairytale the characters is very happy and in story the characters have problems.
6)In fairytale is battle but in story isn't battle.
7)In story the characters died but in fairytale the characters have a long,long life.
8)In fairytale the caracters have magic strenght bunt in story the characters not have magic strenght.
9)In story exist television and in fairytale not exist.
10)The fairytale it finishes with"....and they lived happily ever after"but the story not finishes with".....and they lived happily ever after.
CORINA P
Differences and similarities between a fairytale and a story:
ReplyDelete1) A fairytale begins with " Once upon a time",but a story no.
2) In a fairytale the action had place in a palace or in a castle like in Princess Diana's story where the action had place in a palace.
3)In a fairytale there are imaginary characters ,but in a story there are real characters.
4)In a fairytale there are magic numebrs like three and seven,but in a story there aren't.
5)In a fairytale there are kings,queens,princes and princesses like in Princess Diana's story where there are a queen,a prince and a princess.
6)In a fairytale the good had the first place ,but in a story the evil win.
7)In a fairytale the characters had supernatural powers but in a story no.
8)A fairytale is totally magic ,but a story is real.
9)In a fairytale all the characters are happy,but in a story there aren't.
10)The fairytale finishes with "...and they lived happily ever after",but the story finishes sad.
Cristina S.
The differences were :fairytale always ends with a happy-end;fairytale has magic characters.
ReplyDeleteThe similarities were: Diana was a princess;the magic appears at the ceremony.
Maroiu A.
ENGLISH POLICE : Mihai R.
ReplyDeleteAdriana T. ; Anca M. ; Clara M.
The comment is almost perfect!
TEACHER'S NEED : at the start ,there is "between a fairytale .... which describes a real action that has happened, ... " There appears a present perfect . It's correct? There is no result,and the final of speak is very far.
If it's wrong : -10sp (secondarypoint = sutimi)
MARK : 10 - 9.90 (GOOD-JOB)
Theodor M.
The comment is good,but not for 10.
Mistakes:Diferences 2 : > heve< it's "have"
Similarities 3 : there are not 3 or 7 in the story. (Diana's)
Mark: 8.90
Cristina S.
Great comment,but very close to 9.
Mistakes:
1> there is "a story no" it's the story doesn't"
4> numebrs -> numbers
7> the same mistake as 1.
TEACHER'S NEED : at 2 : there is had place is correct? I know as took place If it's wrong -20SP
MARK: 9.75 - 9.55
Maroiu A.
The comment is correct but how about the rest of the phrases?
MARK:7 (if teacher agrees with it)
English Police Tiberiu S.
ReplyDeleteMihai R. His comment it's perfect. Mark:10
Ioana S. Her comment it's perfect. Mark:10
Corina P. Mistakes:
-"The story it begin with"( without "it" and "begin" with "s")[-0.20]
-"the story not begin with"(the correc form it's "didn't begin")[-0.20]
-"In fairytale are magic number like 3 and 7 but in story isn't magic number."(number it's with "s" and correct is "aren't")[-0.30]
-"In fairytale is characters evil and in story isn't characters evil."( Correct is:In a fairytale are evil characters and in the story aren't evil characters.)[-1.00]
-"In story isn't dragons but in fairytale is dragons."(Correct is :In the story there aren't dragons but in a fairytale are dragons)[0.50]
-"In fairytale the characters is very happy and in story the characters have problems. (Correct is :In a fairytale the characters are very happy and in the story the characters have problems.)[-0.15]
-"In fairytale is battle but in story isn't battle.(Correct is: In a fairytale ...in the story.)[0.05]
-"In story the characters died but in fairytale the characters have a long,long life.(Correct is:In the story ...in a fairytale.)[0.05]
-"In fairytale the caracters have magic strenght bunt in story the characters not have magic strenght.(Correct is:In a fairytale...but in the story the characters don't have...)[0.10]
Mark:7.45